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[May. 26th, 2004|10:04 pm]
loss_for_w0rds

loss_for_w0rds

[assirac]
To write a haiku
Would take more skills then I have
So I'll give up now
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[User Picture]From: chokinmike
2004-05-26 10:07 pm (UTC)
a noble attempt.
i hold full conversations.
take notes, my nigga
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[User Picture]From: aleph1
2004-05-31 11:16 pm (UTC)
michael henry joyce
i'm sorry to inform you
you are not quite black
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[User Picture]From: chokinmike
2004-06-01 07:30 pm (UTC)
who cares if im black
negros can rhyme, not make poems
these are japanese
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[User Picture]From: aleph1
2004-06-02 02:35 pm (UTC)

mistake

sorry you messed up
one too many syllables
in the second line
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[User Picture]From: chokinmike
2004-06-02 10:46 pm (UTC)

Re: mistake

ok to me, a person to doesnt emphasize every syllable, POEMS is one. it flows to me. PO-EMs sounds like goofy english talk. so poems to me is one ok?

you must have something better do to then count those syllables
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